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Gary Lee

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Date Story Comments from Gary Lee Gentle's response Rating
17/06/2006 2:02:48 p.m. Photographic Memory 3 More, More A very nice start! We certainly will also want to know how Heather fits in. Looks like a fun story. Thank You Okay, okay. :-)
24/02/2006 8:36:22 p.m. The Road to Hell - Day 3b I am enjoying this story, though I have no idea quite where you are going. As far as rating the story so far, in an honest rating, 85 of 100. Good start, Believable characters and plotline. 85? I can handle that!
12/06/2005 12:14:05 p.m. The Watcher I liked this story, very much. I have not seen any of your stories before and will now read more of them. Your sentences are polished and your ideas are fresh. This story had spots where the continuity did not quite work. "Jason took hold of his stiff cock, brought it to the front of her vagina and slowly descended from front to back until he reached the damp opening." He was facing her back. This image does not fit. I want stories to flow and sections like this make interuptions in the story. I did enjoy your writing and hope you will continue and improve. 'He was facing her back', you say. Now, picture that, and read the 'sentence' again. Something else before I go, if you're going to leave advice like this, it would be nice to have a way to disagree with you. ;*)